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I hope I'm getting better... Even just a little bit? I'm trying a new manga style, I think I like it better. Let me know what you think :heart:

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You are getting better. You seem to have a better eye for detail. I like the folds on the sleeve and the fact that the strokes for the hair follow the direction it is flowing.

The hair doesn't really seem to fit the form of her skull. When making an outline of the figure, draw the head as if its bald and then draw the hair around it. The bending of the wrists seem a bit extreme.

Try to practice realistic figures more.

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The style is reminiscent of Clamp (Tsubasa, xxxHolic, and many others); but she particularly reminds me of Chii from Chobits. :D She's so adorable!

Honestly, I think all you need to do is add some depth to her head and <3 it will be even more beautiful (which it already is). I :heart: all the detail!

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noice.... go german...felsen auf!!!

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i like the way you move...... like butter on a bald monkey
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Will do. Thanks! :heart:

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aww thanks dearie!

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Getting good :)

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